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科技英語/專業英語——改錯總結【1】

沒選到簡單的英語聽說,只能硬啃專英了~

1:介詞搭配問題

This two engineers are busy to design a kind of new software

正確:be busy (in) doing something      a (new) kind of

voltage is measured with volt

正確:Voltage is measured in volts

This meeting start from 8 o'clock in the last night

正確:This meeting start at 8 o'clock (刪去) last night

voltage/across   current/through    注意常用搭配

2:名詞單複數問題

Fig 1、2、3 draw this process

正確:Figs 1、2 and 3 draw this process (注意用法)

This approach has the advantage of simple in structure, easy to adjust 

正確:This approach has the advantages ofsimple structure and easy  adjustment

For further informations ,consult reference [3,5,9]

正確:For further information ,consult reference [3,5,9]

3:冠詞使用問題

USMA protocol employs an unique frame structure

正確:The USMA protocol employsa unique frame structure

常用搭配:a  unique  /  an  M   / an R-bit  / an  XOR / an S-shaped /an increase  /an ever  (音標要好啊!,不然a/an分不清~

With state-transition diagram, security probability of system is obtained

正確:With the state-transition diagram,the security probability ofthe system is obtained (表示特指的需加冠詞the)

The air exerts the pressure toward all directions

正確:Air exerts pressure in all drections (看到有the /a /an 就停下來考慮其正確性)

4:不當省略問題

Given that the return functions are convex ,and the Hessian determinant is positive 

正確:Given that the return functions are convex ,and that  the Hessian determinant is positive (前面有that,後面也要有)

This one is four times heavier than that one is

正確:This one is five(比原來的重四倍,就是原來的5倍)heavier than that one(is)刪去,應當省略。   

5:特殊搭配

Work equals to force multiplying distance 

正確:Work is equal to /equal force multiplied by distance(equal 用法)

The results  obtained fit the experimental values

正確:The results  obtained agree with /( in agreement with )the experimental values(吻合,使用agree with )