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• "The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering Students"筆記
  • 避免超長句子
  • 避免用"namely/that is to say"
  • 句子主幹提前
  • 用英文單詞而不是阿拉伯數字
  • 用"in this study"而不是"In this paper"
  • 用"by doing this"而不是"by this way"
  • 用"also"而不是"too"
  • 用"are shown in Fig. 2"而不是"are shown as Fig. 2"
  • 在句中用文本描述公式
  • 句首不用"How to"
  • 句首不用"Obviously"
  • 句首不用縮寫或阿拉伯數字

"The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering Students"筆記

本文介紹了中國人在英語寫作中常犯的錯誤，並給出的修改建議；

文章的宗旨是準確表達作者的意思。

避免超長句子

• 一句話表達一個意思；
• 在介紹公式中的大量字母/參數含義時，可以用list代替文本描述

避免用"namely/that is to say"

在一句話裏表達意思；

句子主幹提前

將句子的主幹提前，將修飾的狀語(從句)置後，如to、in、for、when等；

Incorrect: Inside the test box, the space was filled with asbestos.
Correct: The space inside the test box was filled with asbestos.

用英文單詞而不是阿拉伯數字

Incorrect: All 3 studies concluded that the mean temperature should be 30°C.
Correct: All three studies concluded that the mean temperature should be 30°C

用"in this study"而不是"In this paper"

in this paper使用次數不多於3次；必要時可以用in this study/research代替

用"by doing this"而不是"by this way"

用有道詞典的原聲例句功能可以發現，by this way基本沒有出現過；改用by doing this；

用"also"而不是"too"

also是書面體，too是口語；

用"are shown in Fig. 2"而不是"are shown as Fig. 2"

在句中用文本描述公式

Incorrect: If the power battery SOC > SOD and the driving torque belongs to the
middle load, …
Correct: If the power battery SOC is greater than SOD and the driving torque
belongs to the middle load, …

句首不用"How to"

Incorrect: How to find the optimal parameter is the main objective.
Correct: Determining how to find the optimal parameter is the main objective.

句首不用"Obviously"

Incorrect: Obviously, detecting regimes by means of PMH maps is a novel method.
Correct: Detecting regimes by means of PMH maps is a novel method.

句首不用縮寫或阿拉伯數字

"The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering Students"筆記